This is Kyle's poem for our poetry project. His comments about the poem are also included below.
Moon And The Ocean
The sky is dark, the moon is full,the ocean is calm
The sky is dark, the moon is full,the ocean is calm
she dances across him, he relaxes and accepts her
this is neither an erotic dance nor a seductive one
this is the dancing of nature upon itself
the moons glistening on the calm waters
the waves crashing against the cold sand
the two continue this little dance until the dawn
where the sun takes over and she has her chance with the ocean
leaving the moon longing till the dusk
where they are reunited and joined by many more.
This is personal observation of nature in its beauty' it has special meaning to me because I lived near the water for so long, seeing couples pass by on the beaches. How they walked hand and hand only to long for someone else to do the same with. Then it dawned on me that the moon and water were a graceful couple. The story is told in 3rd person omniscient. You can tell as the speaker knows everything but isn't part of the story. Personification can be seen in this poem such as the water and moon having human traits. It's meant to be a spoken word poem.
